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Post by blackwolf on Dec 2, 2013 4:16:04 GMT
((I hope I did this right)) Name: hunter/blackwolf 15 Timber wolf (black fur) DATE OF BIRTH: 8/13 Alias: hunter
DIET: carnivore SCARS/MARKS: scar on left eye, left eye red. PERSONAL STYLE: none, its a wolf
GROUP:N/A RANK: rouge
WEAPON: if you're a Divine, Divine Syndicate, or a Syndicate MAGIC ABILITY: N/A
LIKES: None
DISLIKES: None
STRENGTHS: Winter, had an advantage
WEAKNESSES: Summer heat, prefers winter
HABITS/QUIRKS: He has a habit of an adrenaline rush and will snap at any moment.
FEARS: Death himself
SECRETS: He has no secrets
GOALS: Hopes to become the alpha wolf in a pack.
PERSONALITY: [/div]he hunts at day and walks at night. He likes to hang out with groups and loves to hunt. [/div] FATHER:killer:deceased MOTHER: snow:deceased SIBLINGS: no siblings Other family:noone as of now OTHER IMPORTANT PEOPLE: noone as of now HISTORY:hunter was only a young pup about 9 months when his parents were killed, he took off and went looking for a guardian or pack who will take him. about 3 years later he was attacked resulting with the red eye and scar. He is currently known as the lonewolf. He hasn't found a mate and doesn't plan on it but if he is asked he will accept. Right now he is 15, still a young wolf but has all the teqniques of a full grown adult. If he does become alpha male he will watch over his pack and make sure everyone stays alive. He prefers to be called hunter.
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Lifeless Eyes
Divine Syndicate
The Potato Sloth has visited you recently.....
Posts: 70
OOC name: Waffles
Species: Eagle
Rank: Leader
Mate: N/A
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Post by Lifeless Eyes on Dec 2, 2013 4:19:07 GMT
Alias is like a nickname or a name the character is well known as
Group and ranks are your choice. But if you're a rouge, just put N/A for pack and Rouge as rank.
((The rest is up to Becka (Francisco)
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Post by Francisco on Dec 2, 2013 13:56:28 GMT
Hi there Blackwolf, there are some things we need to fix in your bio in order to make it complete. The Alias is a name that they used for keeping their real name a secret or just a nickname, so hunter would be his alias. Also, having just wolf on your bio won't do, there are many types of wolves so we wouldn't know which one it would be unless we had a picture. Another thing is his age, I may have been unclear for this part but it should be the animals lifespan, not human years. If he was 15 in wolf years then he would be really old and considering he's a wolf, he should have already died at 6 or 7 because he's a loner. A reasonable age would be 1 year and when he was 8 months he could have taken off by himself. Orilath are explained in Creating your characters but it doesn't really apply for you. And since he's a loner he doesn't need anything so you can just put N/A. And a weakness you can put for him is his control over his adrenaline rush, and a strength you can put could be knowing all the fighting techniques at a young age. You also have to add more to his personality and write at least 50 words. Is he a strong silent type? Is he friendly? Is he really aggressive? Would he care for his pack members? Also his history. This is set up in a post-apocalypse world, and humans have died out many years ago, so no animal alive today(unless your a orilath or spirit) would remember humans personally. You can keep the part where his parents are killed, but you'll have to use a different story. Also reveal how he got a scar on his eye and how one of them became red. Was it genetics? Also reveal how he got so good at fighting, why it his parents that taught him that? Please work on this again, I'm not picking on you, I just want your character to be perfect. I suppose some of this is my fault too because I need to be more specific on my part.
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Post by blackwolf on Dec 8, 2013 7:00:08 GMT
((I hope I did this right)) Name: hunter/blackwolf 15 Timber wolf (black fur) DATE OF BIRTH: 8/13 Alias: hunter
DIET: carnivore SCARS/MARKS: scar on left eye, left eye red. PERSONAL STYLE: none, its a wolf
GROUP:N/A RANK: rouge
WEAPON: if you're a Divine, Divine Syndicate, or a Syndicate MAGIC ABILITY: N/A
LIKES: None
DISLIKES: None
STRENGTHS: Winter, had an advantage
WEAKNESSES: Summer heat, prefers winter
HABITS/QUIRKS: He has a habit of an adrenaline rush and will snap at any moment.
FEARS: Death himself
SECRETS: He has no secrets
GOALS: Hopes to become the alpha wolf in a pack.
PERSONALITY: [/div]he hunts at day and walks at night. He likes to hang out with groups and loves to hunt. [/div] FATHER:killer:deceased MOTHER: snow:deceased SIBLINGS: no siblings Other family:noone as of now OTHER IMPORTANT PEOPLE: noone as of now HISTORY:hunter was only a young pup about 9 months when his parents were killed, he took off and went looking for a guardian or pack who will take him. about 3 years later he was attacked resulting with the red eye and scar. He is currently known as the lonewolf. He hasn't found a mate and doesn't plan on it but if he is asked he will accept. Right now he is 15, still a young wolf but has all the teqniques of a full grown adult. If he does become alpha male he will watch over his pack and make sure everyone stays alive. He prefers to be called hunter.
I think I got it fixed up now.
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Post by Francisco on Dec 8, 2013 23:08:31 GMT
Accepted
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